aapka Manzar ,aapki kahani!! 3 march-2012 to 10-march 2012

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  1. saviou

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    masha Allah :)
    bohot khoob acha likha hai janab
     
  2. *khushi*

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    wowwwww

    aap to bohat achy writer ho...mujhy aaj hi pta chla :p

    well bohat achi tehreer hai :)

    best of luck :)
     
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  3. *khushi*

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    waalikumaslam

    bohat achi tehreer hai:)

    best of luck :)
     
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    hmmmm zabardast ML
    bilkul pic k mutabik kahani likhi hai
    or lafzoo ka b sahi use kya hai
    or kahani ka mahool hai usko b acche se define kya hai
    :)
     
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  5. Hoorain

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    Sweet DOll, Khushi aur baqi sab bhi apni kahani share karo jaldi se ....{(popcorn)}
     
  6. Hoorain

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    Bohat zabardast MASHAALLAH

    waqe hi parhte hue Dehat ka saara manzar poori kahani mind may chal rhi thi

    Very nice :-bd

    GUD LUCK! :p
     
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  7. S_ChiragH

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    Wa'alaikum assalam
    hmmm achha muqabla hai!!
    Mein insha'ALLAH kuch share karunga
     
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  8. saviou

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    hamari ek sharing se kitni dhoom mach gayi is thread me :p
    jaise banjar zameen me hariyali agayi wah waah /:)
     
  9. Hoorain

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    hahahaha Saviou bhaya bja farmaya ;))

    ye acha idea hay next time maine sirf aapko Link Vm kar diya karna hay aur aapko baar baar tang karna hay share karain share karain phir kuch share kar k aap khud sabko VM kar diya kariyega meka kaam aasan ;)) :p

    wowwww shabash hoorain shabashhh ye idea pehle q nhi aaya ;;) :p
     
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    Wa'alaikum assalam

    bohot hi achha likha hai bhai jan asal zndagi ke qareeb
    aur khoobsurat andaaz mein

    gud luck
     
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  11. saviou

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    kya kaha ap ne kuch sunai nahi dera /:)
     
  12. Hans_Mukh

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    Ma Shaa Allah Tayyab app nay bohat khoobsurti say gaoo k manzr app nay qalm bund kiya hy

    Allah say Dua'a hy k Allah talah app k qalam ki taqat ma izafa karay (Ameen)

     
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    Behad khoob bhai naseehat bhi
    aur pur lutf bhi bohot hi achha
    hai

    best of luck for the contest bhai
     
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  14. Hoorain

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    hahaha hota hay hota hay ;)) :p
     
  15. Hans_Mukh

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    Bohat Khoob Janab

    Bohat khusurti say app nay apni susti k doooor kerny ki kosish ki hy

    Best of Luck


     
  16. saviou

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    jee jee bas buzurgon ke raste par chalne ki koshish kar rahe hain :p
     
  17. saviou

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    ki honda ye /:)
     
  18. Hoorain

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    wohi jo hoing :p
     
  19. saviou

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    watever/:)
     
  20. S_ChiragH

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    Wa'alaikum assalam

    bohot hi achha likha hai bhai jan asal zndagi ke qareeb
    aur khoobsurat andaaz mein

    gud luck
     
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