aapka Manzar ,aapki kahani!! 3 march-2012 to 10-march 2012

[maher asad]

okesh but friday tak is image pe yahan share karni hay story,,,us k baad to image change kar dungi main

aapi nai naa{)^})thori boht extension to do naa

 

[mashraki.larka]

WahOoo awesOmeeee..!

Zaberdast likha hay Bhiya..! well aap ki sari stOry Given Image se Match kerti hay. Bohat KhObsurati se brief but detailed view paish kia hay aap nay..!

aur Jahan tak likhnay aur words k istymal ki baat hay wOh Bilkul aak mature writer ki terah hain aur Mujhay bOhat acha laga perh k even dil ker raha tha K is se bhi Lambi stOry hota..!

Beautiful n intersting..!

thanks for the vote of confidence HOoria

 

[mashraki.larka]

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beautifully written Nasir bhaiya & ML bhaiya

best of luck both of ya​

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thank you Sona
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[mashraki.larka]

ahaan v.nyc written story ML
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thanks manager
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[Sara Cilli Milli]

Hoor bohat acha thread hy or ik new silsila bhi

 

[mashraki.larka]

Ma Shaa Allah Tayyab app nay bohat khoobsurti say gaoo k manzr app nay qalm bund kiya hy

Allah say Dua'a hy k Allah talah app k qalam ki taqat ma izafa karay (Ameen)

thank you Sajid Bro
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[faari]

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zabardast ml buhat achi koshish ki hai

 

[saviou]

waalikumaslam

bohat achi tehreer hai

best of luck

shukran behna

 

[faari]

aj suba pehly dinoo se kuch ziyada garmi ki tapish jism ko jala rahi thi amma,baba jo din bhar k kaam se thaak jaati thi aj kiran aur amir ne un k kaam me madad ka socha aj un ko school se chuti bi thi amir aur kiran ne soraj ki pehli kiran se amma aur baba ki mada shoro ki baba jo dosri taraf beloon ki madad se kowein se paani nikal rahe thy us paani se kiran aur , amir ne baba k sath khitoon ko siraab krne jana tha kareem chacha jo muweshiyoon ko chara daal rahe thy pass hi kuch bakriyaan bi suba ke nashty ka maza ly rahi thi hari hari ghas kha kr chehchahati chiriyaan suba suba jese choo choo kr k hamdo sana me mashgool thi aur paani ka piyala jo pass hi eik peyr k nechy para tha pi kr jese shukar kr rahi hoon jese is garmi me un ko paani milna kisi mujzy se kaam nae tha murgiyaan apna dana dunka chnne me mashgool thi amma chara ly kr aa gai kiran bi usi peyr k necy ata goondh rahi thi kuta jo k paani ki piyaas se apne piyase hone ka bata raha tha amir jo k bachry ke galy me bahoon ko daly kiran se parantha k sath aj lassi pene ki arzoo zahir kr raha tha

 

[saviou]

Wa'alaikum assalam

bohot hi achha likha hai bhai jan asal zndagi ke qareeb
aur khoobsurat andaaz mein

gud luck

bohot bohot shukriya bro

 

[faari]

Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
abhi tak kisi ne kuch share nahi kiya
chalen is susti ko door karne ke liye ek sust ki kahani hi suna dete hain
waise kahania to ham likhte nahi lekin hoor didi likhna sikha diye akhir
umeed karte hain ap sab ko pasand aaye ye tooti phooti kahani

Main Sust Tha​

roz ki tarah aaj bhi suraj mujh se pehle tulu ho gaya jab bahar aaya to manzar bhi roz ki tarah hi khush gawar tha thandi dhoop thi chirion ki gungunahat bhi, sab apne kaam me khushi khushi lage hue the dada ji bailon ko pani pila rahe the baba kunwe se pani nikal rahe the maa chote padu ke liye ghans la rahi thi jo ghar ka naya rukn hai aur choti bhi ussi ke liye bartan me kuch bana rahi thi, chotu to padu se chimta hua khush tha usse sehla raha tha aur baki janwar bhi roz ki tarah unke apne mashgale me the, raha main ek jo roz ki tarah sust aur nikamma tha lekin pata nahi is baar kya hua mujhe ajeeb lagne laga dil me ye baat baith gayi ke nahi mujhe bhi subha subha uthna hai aur sab ki tarah ghar ka kaam karna hai aur ammi abbu ki madad karni chahiye unka kaha maan na chahiye phir ye soch kar mere andar ek khushi ki lehar daudh parhi aur main sochne laga jab kal ko koi ye manzar dekhe to in sab ke sath unhe main bhi kaam karta hua nazar aana chahiye

ab mujhe kal ki subah ka intezar hai aur ab main keh sakta hun ke main sust tha lekin ab nahi hun

buhat achy bro nice story

 

[Hoorain]

aj suba pehly dinoo se kuch ziyada garmi ki tapish jism ko jala rahi thi amma,baba jo din bhar k kaam se thaak jaati thi aj kiran aur amir ne un k kaam me madad ka socha aj un ko school se chuti bi thi amir aur kiran ne soraj ki pehli kiran se amma aur baba ki mada shoro ki baba jo dosri taraf beloon ki madad se kowein se paani nikal rahe thy us paani se kiran aur , amir ne baba k sath khitoon ko siraab krne jana tha kareem chacha jo muweshiyoon ko chara daal rahe thy pass hi kuch bakriyaan bi suba ke nashty ka maza ly rahi thi hari hari ghas kha kr chehchahati chiriyaan suba suba jese choo choo kr k hamdo sana me mashgool thi aur paani ka piyala jo pass hi eik peyr k nechy para tha pi kr jese shukar kr rahi hoon jese is garmi me un ko paani milna kisi mujzy se kaam nae tha murgiyaan apna dana dunka chnne me mashgool thi amma chara ly kr aa gai kiran bi usi peyr k necy ata goondh rahi thi kuta jo k paani ki piyaas se apne piyase hone ka bata raha tha amir jo k bachry ke galy me bahoon ko daly kiran se parantha k sath aj lassi pene ki arzoo zahir kr raha tha

Ahan nice sis
But tile nhi diya aap ne story ka ,wo bhi dain plz!

GUD LUCK!

 

[Pari]

Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
abhi tak kisi ne kuch share nahi kiya
chalen is susti ko door karne ke liye ek sust ki kahani hi suna dete hain
waise kahania to ham likhte nahi lekin hoor didi likhna sikha diye akhir
umeed karte hain ap sab ko pasand aaye ye tooti phooti kahani

Main Sust Tha​

roz ki tarah aaj bhi suraj mujh se pehle tulu ho gaya jab bahar aaya to manzar bhi roz ki tarah hi khush gawar tha thandi dhoop thi chirion ki gungunahat bhi, sab apne kaam me khushi khushi lage hue the dada ji bailon ko pani pila rahe the baba kunwe se pani nikal rahe the maa chote padu ke liye ghans la rahi thi jo ghar ka naya rukn hai aur choti bhi ussi ke liye bartan me kuch bana rahi thi, chotu to padu se chimta hua khush tha usse sehla raha tha aur baki janwar bhi roz ki tarah unke apne mashgale me the, raha main ek jo roz ki tarah sust aur nikamma tha lekin pata nahi is baar kya hua mujhe ajeeb lagne laga dil me ye baat baith gayi ke nahi mujhe bhi subha subha uthna hai aur sab ki tarah ghar ka kaam karna hai aur ammi abbu ki madad karni chahiye unka kaha maan na chahiye phir ye soch kar mere andar ek khushi ki lehar daudh parhi aur main sochne laga jab kal ko koi ye manzar dekhe to in sab ke sath unhe main bhi kaam karta hua nazar aana chahiye

ab mujhe kal ki subah ka intezar hai aur ab main keh sakta hun ke main sust tha lekin ab nahi hun

acha likha hai ye phar kar lazy bache zaroor active hojainge

 

[saviou]

acha likha hai ye phar kar lazy bache zaroor active hojainge

shukran shukran
jeee jeee apke active hone se pata chal raha hai hame bhi

 

[mashraki.larka]

zabardast ml buhat achi koshish ki hai

thanks faari

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[mashraki.larka]

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aj suba pehly dinoo se kuch ziyada garmi ki tapish jism ko jala rahi thi amma,baba jo din bhar k kaam se thaak jaati thi aj kiran aur amir ne un k kaam me madad ka socha aj un ko school se chuti bi thi amir aur kiran ne soraj ki pehli kiran se amma aur baba ki mada shoro ki baba jo dosri taraf beloon ki madad se kowein se paani nikal rahe thy us paani se kiran aur , amir ne baba k sath khitoon ko siraab krne jana tha kareem chacha jo muweshiyoon ko chara daal rahe thy pass hi kuch bakriyaan bi suba ke nashty ka maza ly rahi thi hari hari ghas kha kr chehchahati chiriyaan suba suba jese choo choo kr k hamdo sana me mashgool thi aur paani ka piyala jo pass hi eik peyr k nechy para tha pi kr jese shukar kr rahi hoon jese is garmi me un ko paani milna kisi mujzy se kaam nae tha murgiyaan apna dana dunka chnne me mashgool thi amma chara ly kr aa gai kiran bi usi peyr k necy ata goondh rahi thi kuta jo k paani ki piyaas se apne piyase hone ka bata raha tha amir jo k bachry ke galy me bahoon ko daly kiran se parantha k sath aj lassi pene ki arzoo zahir kr raha tha ​

nicely sketched Faari

or sath men title bi to do na ...

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[saviou]

aj suba pehly dinoo se kuch ziyada garmi ki tapish jism ko jala rahi thi amma,baba jo din bhar k kaam se thaak jaati thi aj kiran aur amir ne un k kaam me madad ka socha aj un ko school se chuti bi thi amir aur kiran ne soraj ki pehli kiran se amma aur baba ki mada shoro ki baba jo dosri taraf beloon ki madad se kowein se paani nikal rahe thy us paani se kiran aur , amir ne baba k sath khitoon ko siraab krne jana tha kareem chacha jo muweshiyoon ko chara daal rahe thy pass hi kuch bakriyaan bi suba ke nashty ka maza ly rahi thi hari hari ghas kha kr chehchahati chiriyaan suba suba jese choo choo kr k hamdo sana me mashgool thi aur paani ka piyala jo pass hi eik peyr k nechy para tha pi kr jese shukar kr rahi hoon jese is garmi me un ko paani milna kisi mujzy se kaam nae tha murgiyaan apna dana dunka chnne me mashgool thi amma chara ly kr aa gai kiran bi usi peyr k necy ata goondh rahi thi kuta jo k paani ki piyaas se apne piyase hone ka bata raha tha amir jo k bachry ke galy me bahoon ko daly kiran se parantha k sath aj lassi pene ki arzoo zahir kr raha tha

bohot khoob
bohot achi koshish mohtarma
waise apki kahani ka unwaan kya hai

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

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Assalamo alaikum doston mene bhi eik koshish ki per pata nahin kese
story Saviou bhai Taiyab bhai aur Faari sis ke storyz se lambi ho gaiy
aur shayad on the topic sahi bhi nahin hai per mene jo likha aap subke
saamne peish kar raha hoon is umeed ke saath ke pasand aayegi

yeh kahaani ka unwaan shayarana tarz se peish hai

Chain doulat mein nahin mehnat mein hota hai
sukun eish mein nahin ibaadat mein hota hai

Shaam ke auqaat dheemi dheemi sard hawayen baad e namaz e maghrib ka
woh khamosh aur khoobsurat manzar jise dekhne ke liye parinde bhi
aapas mein ghul mil bethte hain....... aise shaam ki auqaat ki baat hai
baba ji kaam se ghar pohnche tab mein aur bilal naatein parh rahe the chunke
baba ji saara din kheiton mein kaam kar ke loute the woh bohot thake huwe the
thakkan ke bawajood mehfil e naat ki adab karte huwe woh humaare paas aa ker
beith gaye aur chunke unka sabaq tha ke har baat se achhi baat ki sabaq lo
to mujhe aur bilal ko eik naya sabaq aaj mila ke chain o sukoon se achha adab
o tameez ka darja hai naat khwani khatam hone ke baad baba ne mujhe aur Bilal bhai
ko shabashi di aur humare naat khwani ki housla afzaiy karne lage itne mein
ammi jaan abuu ji ke liye khaana le aaiyn humare ghar ki zameen kachi zameen
hone ke sabab hum neeche beith kar khaana nahin khaate kyunke niwala neeche girne
per use mitti itni lag jaati hai ke dubara khaane ke qabil nahin rehta humara
eik palang hai jispe hum beith kar khaana khaate hain aur insha'ALLAH is dafa
jab abbu ji raashan laane jayengein shehr se to mein dastarkhwan mangwaungi
khaana khaate waqt bilal ne baat karni chaahi to mene use chupke se ishaara diya
ke is harkat se abbu ji ko chirh hai to Bilal bhai chup ho gaye khaana khaane ke
baad abbu ji aur bilal dono namaz e isha ko chale gaye aur ammi bartan dhone
ko sehen mein gaiyn chunke humare paas itne intazamaat nahin ke hum apne
bartan shehr walon ki tarah saabun ya kisi aisi cheez se dhowein to is liye
hum mitti se hi kaam chala lete hain ammi ji ke barta dhone tak mene bhi
isha ki namaz ada kar li aur sipara le kar beith gaiy ke abhi ?bilal ki wapsi
ke saath hum dono apna sabaq eik dafa dorayengein masjid se wapsi per Abbu aur bilal
ne salam diya aur jese ke salam ka jawab har musalmaan per farz hai mene
paara shareef ka parhna chand lamhaat ko roka aur salam ka jawab diya aur phir mein
aur bilal apna sabaq parhne lage leikin masjid se loutne ke saath mujhe Bilal ke
chehre per eik sawaal dikh raha tha jese woh kisi soch mein hai sabaq parhne
ke baad ammi ji ne humein sone ka kaha aur itne mein abbu ji bhi araam karne ke liye
leit chuke the phir
jis raftar se palak jhapak jaaye
aise hi mazdoor ko neend aa jaaye
mein samajh gaiy ke abbu ji lete hain to so gaye hongein aur ammi ji namaz e isha ada
kar rahi hain aur phir farman e aala ke Dost ko naseehat akele mein karo
phir yehi mouqa mila mujhe bilal ke mann ke us sawal ko jaanne ke liye jo use tang
kar raha tha mere poochne per Bilal ne kaha ke aapi jis zameen per Baba ji saara
din kaam karte hain aur mehnat karte hain to 6 maah poore hone per Baba ji ko uske
badle eik do bori aata hi kyun milta hai jabke saare zameen per hi baba ji ki mehnat
hoti hai......
yahaan tak baat sun ker mujhe sirf eik sawaal laga per agle alfaz mein Bilal ne kuch
aur hi kaha woh bola ke
dekhiye naa hatta ke is hi zameen ke malik jo kehlaate hain woh bhi kitne maaldaar hain
unke paas bhi har eish o araam hai unke bache shehr mein ilm hasil kar rahe hain
itne mein mujhe Bilal ke zehen ki baat taqreeban samajh aa gaiy
mene use is hi nuqte per toka aur kaha ke agar koi humare ghar ko tameer kare
to kya ghar uska ho jaayega nahin na dekhiye bilal wese to gheebat se Huzoor saww
ne sakhti se manah farmaaya per mera RAB jaane ke mein gheebat nahin kar rahi balke
apne chhote bhai ko samjha rahi hoon ke unke bache shehr mein parh to rahe hain
kamyaab ho jayengein per taraqqi nahin karengein Bilal bister khareed lengein
neend nahin le sakengein Bilal aur iski wajah yeh ke Malik sahab ne unke deen ki
taleem nahin di aur Qur'an ki taraf unko mutawajjoh nahin karwaya aur aapko pata hai
naa ke ALLAH humein is dunya mein subhi se zyada pyaar karta hai so woh humein
wohi ata karengein jo humare haq mein behetter hoga, kabhi bhi khud ko tang dast
samajhne se pehle Fareed bhai ko yaad kar lena Bilal jo bechaare nabeena hain
aur is tarah soch kar aapke paas jo nahin uski fikr chorte huwe jo hai uspe
shukr karein kyunke is tarah ALLAH tumhein zyada ata farmayega ji bilkul
theek kaha aapi aap ne mujhe bohot hi achhi baat samjhaaiy mein insha'ALLAH aaj
se bilkul na shukri wali batein zehen mein nahin laaunga
jab mujhe yaqeen huwa ke Bilal ko meri baat samajh aa gaiy hai mene use wazu karke
phir sone ka kaha aur woh wazu karne chala gaya itne mein Ammi ji namaz aur Qur'an
ki tilawat se farigh ho ker aa gaiy thin aur mujhe bhi sone ka keh rahi thin
khair jo sawal mene Bilal ke zehen se khatam kiya ab mere zehen mein aa chuka tha
phir jab hum loug letne lage to mene apni ammi se sawaal kiya ke ammi ji abbu jaan
saare waqt kaam karte hain aur phir bhi humein do waqt ke khaane jitna milta hai
is per ke chachu Jameel(zameendaar)bina utne mehnat ke kitna hasil kar lete hain
is per ammi ji ne mujhe samjhaya ke ALLAH ta'ala is tarah to hum per zyada mehrban
hai
mere heirat me izafa huwa aur mujhe laga ke ammi ji mujhe behla rahi hain phir ammi
ne baat aage barhaiy ke
dunya ki doulat mein hum zarurat se nikal pare to shouq per pohnchengein aur phir
Jameel bhai sahab aur unke hgar walon ki tarah alag alag qism se gunah o kifriyat
ki taraf jaane lagengein mene poocha woh kese to ammi ji boleen
jis tarah mouseeqi haraam aur T.V ka dekhna istemaal karna islam mein jaaiyz nahin
per shehron mein aur gaanv ke raees gharanon mein yeh aam baatein hain per
socha jaaye to gunah e azeem mein ke dayere mein aate hain
itne mein baat ko samajhte huwe mene kaha ke
ji haam ammi ji samajh gaiy humare madrisse ki baji bhi keh rahi thin ke gaane
mouseeqi waghera islam ke dayere se baahir hain per jo maal o doulat ke nashe se
ghafil ho gaye hain woh yeh sub karte hain
ammi boleen ji bilkul sahi kaha unhone aur us ghuflat ko woh chain kehte hain
leikin makhmal ke bister ke bawajood unhein neend nahin aati naa aur humein dekho
mehnat aur raah e raast pe hone ke sabab hum lette hi so jaya karte hain per unhein
sone ke liye bhi dawa chahiye hoti hai ALLAH subhi ko hidayat de is dua ke saath
ammi ne kaha ke bas ab bohot baatein ho gaiyn ab aap bhi so jaaiye itne mein mene
kaha ke ammi ji mujhe bhi mehnat karni hai mein bhi kal kheit chalungi mere mann
ki baat ko na taalte huwe ammi ji ne mujhe kaha ke theek hai chalengein ab so
jaaiye per kal eik naye kaam ki taraf jaungi mein is soch mein parh gaiy aur phir chaandni
ki raat jese waqt e sabah ho mujhe bara hi achha lagta hai aisa manzar
is hi liye azaanon se bhi kuch lamhaat pehle sone ki aarzu hoti hai meri
ab mein so jaati hoon taake subah jaldi uthne ke saath namaz e fajar bhi bilkul
hi hosh mein aur chain ke saath parh sakun ghar mein tamaam loug so chuke to mein
khud ko hi ALLAH hafiz bol ker so jaati hoon subah meri du'a ke ke mutabiq meri aankh
waqt e subah azaan ke waqt se bhi kuch lamhaat pehle khuleen meri aankhen
mene namaz fajar ki namaz ke liye subhi ko jagaya aur phir baad e namaz ke naashta
ke baad hum subhi kheit ki taraf aaj chalne ke lage har taraf hariyali hi hariyali thi
aur kuch Rab ki qudrat ke ata ke saath pyare wale jaanwar gayen aur bail the aur jo pyari
si subh ki hawa aaj itne khule fiza mein mehsoos ki aaj se pehle kabhi nahin
phir mein abbu aur ammi ke kaam mein haath batane lag gaiy aur kal ki baatein yaad ki
ke kal ke tamaam din se mene kya kya achhe asbaaq haasil kiye aur is pyari hariyali
ko deikh kar dil e Sabah se yeh sada aaiy ke aye ALLAH ta'ala saari dunya mein is hi tarah
hariyali ho Ameen

 

[Hoorain]

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Assalamo alaikum doston mene bhi eik koshish ki per pata nahin kese
story Saviou bhai Taiyab bhai aur Faari sis ke storyz se lambi ho gaiy
aur shayad on the topic sahi bhi nahin hai per mene jo likha aap subke
saamne peish kar raha hoon is umeed ke saath ke pasand aayegi

yeh kahaani ka unwaan shayarana tarz se peish hai

Chain doulat mein nahin mehnat mein hota hai
sukun eish mein nahin ibaadat mein hota hai

Shaam ke auqaat dheemi dheemi sard hawayen baad e namaz e maghrib ka
woh khamosh aur khoobsurat manzar jise dekhne ke liye parinde bhi
aapas mein ghul mil bethte hain....... aise shaam ki auqaat ki baat hai
baba ji kaam se ghar pohnche tab mein aur bilal naatein parh rahe the chunke
baba ji saara din kheiton mein kaam kar ke loute the woh bohot thake huwe the
thakkan ke bawajood mehfil e naat ki adab karte huwe woh humaare paas aa ker
beith gaye aur chunke unka sabaq tha ke har baat se achhi baat ki sabaq lo
to mujhe aur bilal ko eik naya sabaq aaj mila ke chain o sukoon se achha adab
o tameez ka darja hai naat khwani khatam hone ke baad baba ne mujhe aur Bilal bhai
ko shabashi di aur humare naat khwani ki housla afzaiy karne lage itne mein
ammi jaan abuu ji ke liye khaana le aaiyn humare ghar ki zameen kachi zameen
hone ke sabab hum neeche beith kar khaana nahin khaate kyunke niwala neeche girne
per use mitti itni lag jaati hai ke dubara khaane ke qabil nahin rehta humara
eik palang hai jispe hum beith kar khaana khaate hain aur insha'ALLAH is dafa
jab abbu ji raashan laane jayengein shehr se to mein dastarkhwan mangwaungi
khaana khaate waqt bilal ne baat karni chaahi to mene use chupke se ishaara diya
ke is harkat se abbu ji ko chirh hai to Bilal bhai chup ho gaye khaana khaane ke
baad abbu ji aur bilal dono namaz e isha ko chale gaye aur ammi bartan dhone
ko sehen mein gaiyn chunke humare paas itne intazamaat nahin ke hum apne
bartan shehr walon ki tarah saabun ya kisi aisi cheez se dhowein to is liye
hum mitti se hi kaam chala lete hain ammi ji ke barta dhone tak mene bhi
isha ki namaz ada kar li aur sipara le kar beith gaiy ke abhi ?bilal ki wapsi
ke saath hum dono apna sabaq eik dafa dorayengein masjid se wapsi per Abbu aur bilal
ne salam diya aur jese ke salam ka jawab har musalmaan per farz hai mene
paara shareef ka parhna chand lamhaat ko roka aur salam ka jawab diya aur phir mein
aur bilal apna sabaq parhne lage leikin masjid se loutne ke saath mujhe Bilal ke
chehre per eik sawaal dikh raha tha jese woh kisi soch mein hai sabaq parhne
ke baad ammi ji ne humein sone ka kaha aur itne mein abbu ji bhi araam karne ke liye
leit chuke the phir
jis raftar se palak jhapak jaaye
aise hi mazdoor ko neend aa jaaye
mein samajh gaiy ke abbu ji lete hain to so gaye hongein aur ammi ji namaz e isha ada
kar rahi hain aur phir farman e aala ke Dost ko naseehat akele mein karo
phir yehi mouqa mila mujhe bilal ke mann ke us sawal ko jaanne ke liye jo use tang
kar raha tha mere poochne per Bilal ne kaha ke aapi jis zameen per Baba ji saara
din kaam karte hain aur mehnat karte hain to 6 maah poore hone per Baba ji ko uske
badle eik do bori aata hi kyun milta hai jabke saare zameen per hi baba ji ki mehnat
hoti hai......
yahaan tak baat sun ker mujhe sirf eik sawaal laga per agle alfaz mein Bilal ne kuch
aur hi kaha woh bola ke
dekhiye naa hatta ke is hi zameen ke malik jo kehlaate hain woh bhi kitne maaldaar hain
unke paas bhi har eish o araam hai unke bache shehr mein ilm hasil kar rahe hain
itne mein mujhe Bilal ke zehen ki baat taqreeban samajh aa gaiy
mene use is hi nuqte per toka aur kaha ke agar koi humare ghar ko tameer kare
to kya ghar uska ho jaayega nahin na dekhiye bilal wese to gheebat se Huzoor saww
ne sakhti se manah farmaaya per mera RAB jaane ke mein gheebat nahin kar rahi balke
apne chhote bhai ko samjha rahi hoon ke unke bache shehr mein parh to rahe hain
kamyaab ho jayengein per taraqqi nahin karengein Bilal bister khareed lengein
neend nahin le sakengein Bilal aur iski wajah yeh ke Malik sahab ne unke deen ki
taleem nahin di aur Qur'an ki taraf unko mutawajjoh nahin karwaya aur aapko pata hai
naa ke ALLAH humein is dunya mein subhi se zyada pyaar karta hai so woh humein
wohi ata karengein jo humare haq mein behetter hoga, kabhi bhi khud ko tang dast
samajhne se pehle Fareed bhai ko yaad kar lena Bilal jo bechaare nabeena hain
aur is tarah soch kar aapke paas jo nahin uski fikr chorte huwe jo hai uspe
shukr karein kyunke is tarah ALLAH tumhein zyada ata farmayega ji bilkul
theek kaha aapi aap ne mujhe bohot hi achhi baat samjhaaiy mein insha'ALLAH aaj
se bilkul na shukri wali batein zehen mein nahin laaunga
jab mujhe yaqeen huwa ke Bilal ko meri baat samajh aa gaiy hai mene use wazu karke
phir sone ka kaha aur woh wazu karne chala gaya itne mein Ammi ji namaz aur Qur'an
ki tilawat se farigh ho ker aa gaiy thin aur mujhe bhi sone ka keh rahi thin
khair jo sawal mene Bilal ke zehen se khatam kiya ab mere zehen mein aa chuka tha
phir jab hum loug letne lage to mene apni ammi se sawaal kiya ke ammi ji abbu jaan
saare waqt kaam karte hain aur phir bhi humein do waqt ke khaane jitna milta hai
is per ke chachu Jameel(zameendaar)bina utne mehnat ke kitna hasil kar lete hain
is per ammi ji ne mujhe samjhaya ke ALLAH ta'ala is tarah to hum per zyada mehrban
hai
mere heirat me izafa huwa aur mujhe laga ke ammi ji mujhe behla rahi hain phir ammi
ne baat aage barhaiy ke
dunya ki doulat mein hum zarurat se nikal pare to shouq per pohnchengein aur phir
Jameel bhai sahab aur unke hgar walon ki tarah alag alag qism se gunah o kifriyat
ki taraf jaane lagengein mene poocha woh kese to ammi ji boleen
jis tarah mouseeqi haraam aur T.V ka dekhna istemaal karna islam mein jaaiyz nahin
per shehron mein aur gaanv ke raees gharanon mein yeh aam baatein hain per
socha jaaye to gunah e azeem mein ke dayere mein aate hain
itne mein baat ko samajhte huwe mene kaha ke
ji haam ammi ji samajh gaiy humare madrisse ki baji bhi keh rahi thin ke gaane
mouseeqi waghera islam ke dayere se baahir hain per jo maal o doulat ke nashe se
ghafil ho gaye hain woh yeh sub karte hain
ammi boleen ji bilkul sahi kaha unhone aur us ghuflat ko woh chain kehte hain
leikin makhmal ke bister ke bawajood unhein neend nahin aati naa aur humein dekho
mehnat aur raah e raast pe hone ke sabab hum lette hi so jaya karte hain per unhein
sone ke liye bhi dawa chahiye hoti hai ALLAH subhi ko hidayat de is dua ke saath
ammi ne kaha ke bas ab bohot baatein ho gaiyn ab aap bhi so jaaiye itne mein mene
kaha ke ammi ji mujhe bhi mehnat karni hai mein bhi kal kheit chalungi mere mann
ki baat ko na taalte huwe ammi ji ne mujhe kaha ke theek hai chalengein ab so
jaaiye per kal eik naye kaam ki taraf jaungi mein is soch mein parh gaiy aur phir chaandni
ki raat jese waqt e sabah ho mujhe bara hi achha lagta hai aisa manzar
is hi liye azaanon se bhi kuch lamhaat pehle sone ki aarzu hoti hai meri
ab mein so jaati hoon taake subah jaldi uthne ke saath namaz e fajar bhi bilkul
hi hosh mein aur chain ke saath parh sakun ghar mein tamaam loug so chuke to mein
khud ko hi ALLAH hafiz bol ker so jaati hoon subah meri du'a ke ke mutabiq meri aankh
waqt e subah azaan ke waqt se bhi kuch lamhaat pehle khuleen meri aankhen
mene namaz fajar ki namaz ke liye subhi ko jagaya aur phir baad e namaz ke naashta
ke baad hum subhi kheit ki taraf aaj chalne ke lage har taraf hariyali hi hariyali thi
aur kuch Rab ki qudrat ke ata ke saath pyare wale jaanwar gayen aur bail the aur jo pyari
si subh ki hawa aaj itne khule fiza mein mehsoos ki aaj se pehle kabhi nahin
phir mein abbu aur ammi ke kaam mein haath batane lag gaiy aur kal ki baatein yaad ki
ke kal ke tamaam din se mene kya kya achhe asbaaq haasil kiye aur is pyari hariyali
ko deikh kar dil e Sabah se yeh sada aaiy ke aye ALLAH ta'ala saari dunya mein is hi tarah
hariyali ho Ameen

waalaikum assalam

AHaaaaaan

Unwan bohat pasand aaya meko

n nice story bohat achi aur masoom batain sikhayi

GUD LUCK!

 

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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
abhi tak kisi ne kuch share nahi kiya
chalen is susti ko door karne ke liye ek sust ki kahani hi suna dete hain
waise kahania to ham likhte nahi lekin hoor didi likhna sikha diye akhir
umeed karte hain ap sab ko pasand aaye ye tooti phooti kahani

Main Sust Tha​

roz ki tarah aaj bhi suraj mujh se pehle tulu ho gaya jab bahar aaya to manzar bhi roz ki tarah hi khush gawar tha thandi dhoop thi chirion ki gungunahat bhi, sab apne kaam me khushi khushi lage hue the dada ji bailon ko pani pila rahe the baba kunwe se pani nikal rahe the maa chote padu ke liye ghans la rahi thi jo ghar ka naya rukn hai aur choti bhi ussi ke liye bartan me kuch bana rahi thi, chotu to padu se chimta hua khush tha usse sehla raha tha aur baki janwar bhi roz ki tarah unke apne mashgale me the, raha main ek jo roz ki tarah sust aur nikamma tha lekin pata nahi is baar kya hua mujhe ajeeb lagne laga dil me ye baat baith gayi ke nahi mujhe bhi subha subha uthna hai aur sab ki tarah ghar ka kaam karna hai aur ammi abbu ki madad karni chahiye unka kaha maan na chahiye phir ye soch kar mere andar ek khushi ki lehar daudh parhi aur main sochne laga jab kal ko koi ye manzar dekhe to in sab ke sath unhe main bhi kaam karta hua nazar aana chahiye

ab mujhe kal ki subah ka intezar hai aur ab main keh sakta hun ke main sust tha lekin ab nahi hun

buhat achy bro nice story