hahah tauba hay kinne kachu maasar hoapka bhai hun apke naqhse par chalunga na
ji my tayyar hu ap signal du phir duadna shuru
Gaun Ki Kahani Bahen Ki Zubani
- Thread starter *Muslim*
- Start date
shukria bhaaiBhout khoub Poetry hai
kia haal hi mery gaon ka
pipal ki thandi chhaon ka
sharmili shokh nighahon ka,
un naz bhari adaon ka
o story bhi achi hai read ker k feel hota hai k gaon my hon dil kerta hai k 2, 4 months k lee gaon chutian bitany chala jaon
g zarur jao phir gaun ke bare me batana na bhulna[DOUBLEPOST=1347177898][/DOUBLEPOST]
TOpppppppppp secret
array nhi yr wo to mazaqan kaha tha apki story to maine puri read ki hai yaqin nhi to story ke beech main se kuch b poch lomatlab ap sirf ek line par ke comment karte hu
bade bhai ap bul rahe hu tu apki baat par yaqeen hy
phir bhi aap hi kuch beecka batadu
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shukria g du chunke rakha tha ek fit hui tu wahi share kia[DOUBLEPOST=1347183716][/DOUBLEPOST]walaikumsalamwaah nazam toh bahut chun k nikali ae shydaur kahani b bahut achi aebest of luck !
shukria g apki b achi hy thuri lambi hy[DOUBLEPOST=1347183790][/DOUBLEPOST]oye hoye muslim paa g to chopay rustam niklay.....
nice story muslim...best of luck chotay bacchay
bht shukria bhaai
aap time nikal kar mera thread visit kie acha laga[DOUBLEPOST=1347183909][/DOUBLEPOST]
bht shukriaZaberdast...! Mash'Allah bohat acha likha hay.
Aap ne shyed First Time Koi urdu Tahreer likhi hay. Shairy bohat ache lagi kyun ke us main Gaon k Traditional Atmosphere ko biyan kia giya hay..! aur Tasveer ke Manzar Kashi bohat ache ke hay sabhe Manazir ko Catch kia hay..! Admirable Effort.
Best of Luck...!
g ye shurat hi hy my is manzar dekh ke ek do bar likne ki kushish ki lekin utna kamiab ny raha tu ye bhi aise hi likha ap sab ku pasand ayaa muje bht hausla mila aur poetry muje b achi lagi thuri funny b hy but achi hy
zaruru parna bhaai[DOUBLEPOST=1347184101][/DOUBLEPOST]Wa'alaikumussalaam wrwb bro...
itni lambi...fursat mei parh ke comment karonga inshaAllah..
All the best
aap yaqeen ko shak me badalre :confused:
ji pic par hi tu manzarkashi ki hy kiu apko ny lagta kia?Kia aapne gaun k pic k mutabiq kahani likhe hain ?
jab koi apne gaon jata hain tu bht enjoy karta hain aur waha k logo mehman nawazi b bht ache se karte hain
aapko b chuttio me apne gaun jana chahiye
anyways bht pyari kahani ti parh kar bht acha laga
haan gaun wale mehman nawazi achi karte hy
ap b gaun me huti hy kia ?[DOUBLEPOST=1347184379][/DOUBLEPOST]
bhaai mukar tu ny raha but phir bhi insaan hu
shukria bhaai[DOUBLEPOST=1347184498][/DOUBLEPOST]
hehe g bhaai
kher ap ne meri story parhi hy muje yaqeen hai
shukria bhaiWalekum Assalam wrwb Bohot zabardast
Masha'ALLAH Muslim Bhai aapne bohot achi tarah se manzar nigaari ko pesh kiya hai
All d Best
shukria bhai chuti si koshish ku pasand krne k lie aur hausla afzai k lie
janab bohit hi achi koshish hay or mujy ap ki nazam bohit hi achi lagi,, aainda bhi likhty rehain bohit power hay ap kay qalam main,,
bht shukria
bhaai tahreer tu my ne khud likhi hy but nazm my ne chun k share kia hy
ap bht din baad aye hu shayd busy hunge[DOUBLEPOST=1347213243][/DOUBLEPOST]
shukriaBohut acha likha hai
Bhai se bohut kisse sune hain waqai village ki to har bat he suhni lati hai waise mai kabhi nhi gai but jane ka bohut shoq hai.
my gaya hun gaun aur shahar se usku bht behtar bi paya hun aur idar saudi me b my koi bade shahar me ny hun balke ye b ek gaun ya phir town keh sakte ap
kiya kerain perdese main ,, time nikalana bera hi mushkal hota hay ,, phir bhi ,kabhi kabhi online aaing,