L Leisure Newbie Jul 3, 2011 1 0 0 Jul 3, 2011 #1 Can someone please give me some feedback about the first part of a story I wrote?
Nelly VIP Sep 23, 2009 97,862 38,645 1,313 United Kingdom Jul 3, 2011 #2 thread moved can u plz post ur story in here so we can easily read n give feedback den
S SHB_Bhaiya محمد شعیب ںاصر Super Star Jan 31, 2010 51,098 10,427 1,313 39 Karachi Jul 3, 2011 #3 Leisure said: Can someone please give me some feedback about the first part of a story I wrote? Click to expand... where's your story friend....
Leisure said: Can someone please give me some feedback about the first part of a story I wrote? Click to expand... where's your story friend....
Qawareer میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے VIP Sep 1, 2010 22,663 10,941 1,113 Jul 5, 2011 #4 plz share ur story..